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Take my hand
Contributed by
hiku
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Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Take my hand, and togeather we
will explore the darkness. This deep,
deep abyss that i inhabit. Take my hand
so that i may never be alone again. Lets explore
the shadows that inhabit my black heart, to find out
how it works.
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Re: Take my hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 09:09:48 PM AEST (User
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Oh, you'll improve, don't doubt it (though it takes longer than we'd like, usually). But you'd do better to use real English and not messenger-speak, even in the author's note. Learn to use the language well, and to respect it, and you will be able to conjure images much better than you think. As for practical means of acquiring good language, read a lot of poetry, by those who do it well, as well as by those who are still amateurs.
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