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Narcissus, Transformed
Contributed by
nos
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Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 12:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Echo, Echo can you hear me?
Echo, Echo is that you?
I’ve been reflecting on how
I’ve been deflecting your advances
I hope my chances aren’t ruined
Echo, Echo can you hear me?
Echo, Echo is that you?
I can see from the shallows
how shallow I’ve been
I should have seen beyond myself
Echo, Echo how you haunt me
Echo, Echo is that you?
Echo.........Echo.........
Copyright ©
nos
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2007-03-03 12:24:22]
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Re: Narcissus, Transformed
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by AMIE on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 01:23:12 PM AEST
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| Very reflective. |
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Re: Narcissus, Transformed
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by artjunkiekyle on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:35:52 PM AEST
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| this poem mirrors all that i view as great and honest. loves it! |
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Re: Narcissus, Transformed
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:29:45 AM AEST
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| Strange that you should call it Narcissus and then make it about sound....it is not about what you see and of course Narcissus is all about appearance....so perhaps people should pay attention to what they hear not what they see?thought provoking never the less. I like it Thank you |
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