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the bar
Contributed by
one11
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Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 04:59:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Sometimes I wish for this to be over
and all this time I never wanted to be sober
even though I still fight for what is right
I still desire to have this blurry sight
socializing in the midst of belligerence
I seem to lose sight of this ignorance
losing vision of what I once believed
I can't see with this vision I'm deceived
the inspiration poem on a bar napkin
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one11
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2007-03-03 04:59:22]
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Re: the bar
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:20:21 AM AEST
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> this " socializing in the midst of belligerence" is a great line. altogether a splendid poem. Interesting little journey.
Ben
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Re: the bar
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 01:01:18 PM AEST
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Great write
I can relate |
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