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I Will Remember You Always
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 10:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I Will Remember You Always
I will remember you always,
rock-hard and iron-straight,
wooden-spoon-stern, and
flawlessly forgiving.
I will remember you always,
your features engraved
upon the marble of my mind,
larger than life.
I will remember you always,
as so much more than just a word,
a title or a name, you will forever be
my humble beginning.
I will remember you always,
statuesque and beautiful, with rare
moments of weakness, demonstrative
that is all right to cry.
and
I will remember you always,
as tears wash through the valleys
of my cracked, desert cheeks…
reduced
to stone.
Additional authors note:
I felt it necessary to dispell any well meaning, sympathetic readers
My mother is quite alive, well, and residing in beautiful Colorado.
Thanks anyway.
~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2007-03-02 22:35:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 11:33:48 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write. Also glad to hear that your mother is quite well. :D
-Kristina |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 12:31:31 AM AEST (User
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This my friend is flawless. Leaving many a feeling. I am also thankful you left the note at the end to let us know that your mother is well. I got worried there for a moment:).
Michelle |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 11:00:07 AM AEST (User
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lol you got me going there for a minute.
an excellent write nazzy |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by Arden on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 11:06:16 AM AEST (User
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Like i promised; i have been snooping through your recent writes.
you have changed, i think, a lot. you've become deeper, emotional, and more amazing then ever.
this write is very beautiful and deep.
i've not written in over a year, you have inspired me, my friends :)
thank you.
and very well done. |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:46:43 PM AEST (User
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Your dedication here carries your power and insight deep in to the readers heart & mind. Your talent for expression and the passion of your pieces comes alive as each line is spoken aloud. Consider me a fan and friend.
Bravo
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST (User
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Snazzerdoodle! That picture is powerful, hun!
I can see why and how you were inspired .. (but I am, too,
glad to know your mother is alive and well) .. which brings
me to this .. I am incredibly impressed that you have the
ability to write such an emotional piece without benefit
of actual experience. Exceptional, scotty! Your talent
knows no bounds.
With humility and respect ~
~Breezy |
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Re: I Will Remember You Always
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 03:47:39 PM AEST (User
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I wonder......has she read it?
I'll bet it gives her peace knowing she will always be remembered with such rock solid fondnesss.
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