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Meant To Be
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hate you
You love me
Quite unfortunate
But I think we were meant to be.
You hold my hand
As I fall
I don't answer
When you call.
And as I silently scream
Bleeding all my tears
You sit and dream
All the things killing me.
When you cry
I stare,
When you sigh
I grin,
When you hug me
I frown,
When you see
I'm blind,
I think we were meant to be.
So before death tears me apart
And before I set this free
Before I break our bond
Let hatred bless you with me.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2007-03-02 19:42:50]
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Re: Meant To Be
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:48:19 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Good flow. |
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Re: Meant To Be
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 08:44:51 PM AEST
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A RETO-ACTIVE KIND OF PASSION! A YES & NO-A GUESS OR YOU KNOW!! SOUNDS LIKE YOUR HEART HAS WHAT IT TAKES TO WRITE SOMETHING GREATT!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Meant To Be
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by priss on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 06:29:37 PM AEST
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| nicely done! i absolutely loved it. you've so honestly conveyed in this poem how we sometimes feel in relationships, though we can't admit it, even to ourselves. |
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