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Imagine
Contributed by
Kaylab
on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 06:39:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Close your eyes
and take a breath
Spread your wings of pure white,
Lift your head
and join hands ..
as you hear the wind blow
a song of destiny,
Destruction in the images
within your desperate mind.
When you open your eyes wide enough -
you'll cry demonic tears - For
your heart and feelings..
will be destroyed.
Just remember...
to take a deep breath -
open up your mind -
look pas the imagery -
for only there...
is something of worth, you will find.
Copyright ©
Kaylab
... [
2007-03-02 18:39:21]
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Re: Imagine
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by doug on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:35:03 PM AEST
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I thought this was quite beautiful.
I've read your last poem as well
and I like the way you write.
Truly , Doug |
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Re: Imagine
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 08:57:40 PM AEST
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NOT ONLY A PRETTY POEM,BUT A POWERFUL ONE TOO! IT SINGS AS IT SOARS WITH A BEAUTIFUL MEANING & EVER MORE!! IT'S A 5!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Imagine
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:16:04 AM AEST
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| this is such a wonderful message that viewed through different eyes the world and things can change their perspective...lovely knowingness in your words. Thank you |
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