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Lust
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 05:13:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Removed, a thirst from mind not body
In acts of urge will be ours only
Unattached with big eyes I desire
Gulping and gasping in what should be fire
But in place is faux endeavor
Surrendered heat, aversion of pleasure
In act of hunger the itch breathes fast
In exhausting greed of lust alas
While set asunder future and past
Starving hard for heat to last
Out of breath and dripping wet
Keep the connect, ready, set
While so close, far hovers near
And divides warmth to slow paced sear
Cut apart by looming angst
Feeling lewdness of largest haste
Appetite, longing, love, desire
Should be driven away from worlds entire
Copyright ©
boobiepeach
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2007-03-02 17:13:23]
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Re: Lust
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:46:45 PM AEST
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Interesting write, nonetheless I enjoyed it very much. Nice work.
-Marisa
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Re: Lust
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:52:49 AM AEST
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Well done. I liked this alot. The poem read smooth and the rhyming was tight the whole way through the poem. Amazing job.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Lust
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 07:34:28 AM AEST
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great job noodley
you usully don't rhyme, but it was a nice change. |
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