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Your My Eternity . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:39:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon
that road
of youthfulness
my love she came to
me, amidst a summer
afternoon, somewhere
by the
sea.
so
beautiful
my world became
when she would come to
call,
to
her
i gave
my heart
and name, to me
she gave her
all.
As
soft as
foot prints in
the sand she placed
her hand in
mine,
and
of
my heart
she took comand,
this lady so
devine.
As
the years
went passing by
i love'd her more
and more, even
now i can't
deny,
her beauty i
adore.
You
are my wife
you are my friend
your all my life could be,
your my begining and
my end, your my
eternity.
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by one11 on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 10:41:45 AM AEST
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| your poems are always so fluid, like you can't help but read it in the way you intended. simple yet well thought and powerful. |
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by Loriann on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 02:29:30 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful. You wife is lucky to have a man who adores her so much. Great job
Loriann |
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 05:31:37 PM AEST
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This is simply precious.
What always draws me in on your luvly poems to your wife is the fact that you show, not tell this incredible luv that is endless.
You are the greatest, my friend!
Big huggs, siles,
emy |
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:44:37 PM AEST
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Ben, this is absolutely beautiful. You express yourself so eloquently and with so much emotion. Your wife is very lucky to have someone like you care for her so much.
Your friend,
Marisa |
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:23:50 PM AEST
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I hate to be unoriginal, still, somethings deserve reiteration & this is something I've thought to myself several times after one of your writes, so...I'm w/ the 1st to comment on this...
"your poems are always so fluid, like you can't help but read it in the way you intended"
Great job!
BLMP~me |
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Re: Your My Eternity . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 12:47:11 AM AEST
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Your poetry seals the deal in romance and the flow of this is beauitful my friend.
~Michelle~ |
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