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Spiritual Parking
Contributed by
nos
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Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 02:51:38 AM in AEST
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spiritual
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God, will you validate my parking?
I've paid the price, now please just let me pass
All you've got to do is stamp this ticket, Lord
So my soul can be saved from sin at last
Now if you would just validate my parking, God
I'll abstain from all this annoying alliteration
I think you can understand my desire, Lord
I'm just looking for a little validation
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nos
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2007-03-02 02:51:38]
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Re: Spiritual Parking
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 03:08:40 AM AEST
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This is a cute poem, it brought a smile to my face.
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Re: Spiritual Parking
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by KaylaB on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 06:03:59 PM AEST
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Great write! you should write more often. im sure you have it in you!
thanks for sharing,
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Re: Spiritual Parking
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:13:06 AM AEST
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| A prayer written with a natural beauty of reality. I enjoyed with warmth of heart. thank you |
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