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one thousand ninety three days
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 01:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wear this thing
A symbol of a long dead dream
I polish it from time to time
In little ways you can say it keeps my mind
But
But I
I do not wish for a long last kiss
Nor do I entertain with what I once missed
I do not ask for your ear to hear
Or for the fantasy to reappear
I've been in this shape for a thousand days
With little light thru the haze
I've been sitting at the bottem of the tree
Yet the apple has failed to seed
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rhei76
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2007-03-01 13:19:40]
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Re: one thousand ninety three days
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by trixxx on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:02:58 PM AEST
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great poem, loved it
reall got your feeling across |
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Re: one thousand ninety three days
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by one11 on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 10:32:30 AM AEST
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| i see now how you can relate. time heals all. awesome theme, great expresion, not the best i've seen of yours but good. |
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