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Later
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:48:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the latter-----------------------------
Thoughts they cross
As shells they push
It ain't no loss
I just tell my mind -Hush-
& I shove those whispers back
In the late....................................
I just tell myself no
As the idea is a needle
Pushing into the cloud it sowed
I just try to hush the keep hold
As I shove those whispers down
Now,
In the morning
I awake to walk the land
Your name on the tip of my brain
I don't care if it goes or stays
This day will be today just the same
I cross twenty acres
I push shell and broken arrowheads
I look thru the foot hills
& take a nap in a tree
Even though I'm five hundred seventy miles from thee
I scratch my heart for sweet words to bleed
Later--------------------------------
In four years or so
I might come to write them down
When you're 1200 miles away
I kiss the thoughts
& memories you gave
Although we could never save
Sweetheart I hope you're still smiling today
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-03-01 12:48:18]
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Re: Later
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 09:46:17 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful poem. Im sorry that you lost her. Excellent write all the same |
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Re: Later
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by ricrud on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 07:59:37 AM AEST
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| very cool...there's darkness and distance all around.. |
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Re: Later
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 11:28:08 AM AEST
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that's all we can wish for someone we love/lost - joy
this was a very touching piece of the soul
take care
-K.Z. |
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