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A Complaint
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:07:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Ah! I do know the winds shall blow,
And the same old Titanic will me row,
To the distant promised harbour,
Where were placed my dear parents,
And grandparents long, long ago.
I shall complain and tell them the tale,
“On the Earth, on each dale and vale,
Thunder thunders flaming the lands,
Ravaging the green or purple peaks,
Each tree you planted is dry or pale.”
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
... [
2007-03-01 08:07:59]
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Re: A Complaint
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 09:19:15 AM AEST
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| A good piece...thank you |
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Re: A Complaint
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 11:39:44 AM AEST
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Brief and to the point. I like had you wrote this. War just sucks and I wish it were non-existent.
Peace to you,
Laura |
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Re: A Complaint
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:01:01 PM AEST
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such a powerful penned out write.. I love the imagery used in this piece.. very well done
vampyress jenni |
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