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LONELINESS
Contributed by
openheart
on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:05:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I watched the waves
as they came in
so many thoughts
running thru my mind.
Four month's of sadness,
and loneliness
a way out I'm trying to find.
I constantly keep thinking
of all the wonderfull years.
To many times every day
my eyes are filled with tears.
The love of my life
no longer to keep me warm..
I feel I'm locked in a room
in the midst of a violent storm.
The memories will never leave me,
but now I must find a way
to go on with my life
and brighten every day.
The sun will shine on me once again
and I will see a star in the sky.
Enjoy every day of my life
always reaching for a new high.
.
Copyright ©
openheart
... [
2007-03-01 08:05:51]
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Re: LONELINESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:37:12 AM AEST
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Yes, a nice one...
You express your emotions beautifully.
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Re: LONELINESS
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:04:17 PM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this.. I liked how the beginning starts off like its going to be sad and then the ending gives one hope.. great job
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