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krazy girl
Contributed by
one11
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Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:02:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you want me to write you a song
about what we've had for so long
and our baby that we've lost
we have nothing for the cost
for this i still cannot let go
i must thrive with what i know
when i am with you i seem complete
though i don't feel like i can compete.
how can you ever think this is done
when there is a love like this one?
thoughts of you and me taken away
kindof gives me comfort in a way
but i would never trade it for your face
i'd have to go down in this human race.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
i dont want to love you this much
though i love your painful touch
this beloved pain
brings temporary gain
but the deepness of this hole
is beginning to tare my soul
though this makes me smile
i cannot do this for a while.
if i can't prove this to me
how can i show anybody
it will be hard cause i am addicted
and for this love i've been afflicted.
she wants to be free from worry
as she takes my temporary sanity
i desolve myself in this bitterness
cause this misstress is what i miss
but the deepness of this hole,
though this makes me smile,
is beginning to tare my soul
so i cannot do this for a while
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Re: krazy girl
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 09:29:51 AM AEST
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| Filled with feeling and a good painful write I do like the verse" she wants to be free from worry as she takes my temporary sanity." thank you |
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Re: krazy girl
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 01:29:08 PM AEST
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Great wording, I love this piece
the way you write the way I read
I just feel I can relate. |
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