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Nymph Seduction
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 06:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Eyes of chocolate stardust tremble as my lips whisper
Sweet adoration on cherub petals.
Fingertips like silk on thy breasts, and
I hear your throbbing lust resonating at
The rosy meeting between your legs where
Your mound flutters with
Nocturnal eyelashes…
My tongue cries to taste your soul
of thick marmalade rain,
delightful tears of virgin blood
And the scent of your sexual water is enough
To make the winds howl your name…
The moon kisses your angel skin like
I wish to-
Wrap myself around your writhing body with
Sighs of black lilies and nuptial passion-
Feel you clenching your pale, moist haven as I
Bury my love deep into the perpetuity of your bruised heart…
And ever falling short to describe you, my
Luscious manifestation. Silent desire. Lunar flower.
You lay before me like a broken offering,
Wisps of chestnut tresses languishing in the honey sweat
On your smooth forehead,
Savage hands harvesting in the intricate web of my curls,
As I drink with undying thirst
Your lascivious wine…
The night moans with your voice
Of bestial fire and red marigolds.
Guttural sobs of ecstasy and mourning
From both of our pleading mouths
Embellishing the corners of this soiled fantasy
I love you as certain dark things should be love,
In secret, between the shadow and the soul.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2007-02-28 18:13:36]
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 10:53:10 PM AEST
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| I'm almost afraid to comment on this one...it rides the waves of passion almost to the point of erotic...now mind I said almost...I personally think it's great...sensual and of course very alive...but then who am I? Great write. |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:15:13 PM AEST
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You got the images beautiful. A marvelous blend of personal expression I & You's dance amid language compression and elegance.
I read this and reread this and all works aside I just disassociated and lost time as hugged myself, arms wrapped around shins, chin on knees, rocking in longing.
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 10:13:53 AM AEST
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Stephy, I... uhm, wow.
The images and descriptive quality do teeter upon a line of near eroticism, walking up to a ledge and hesitating for a brief instant. Almost commanding the reader to plunge and pull the words down with them.
You never disappoint and always leave a reader wanting ... more.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by doug on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 12:31:56 AM AEST
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The passion in your writing
could bring the dead back
to life. If I have not been a
fan before than no matter for I am
certainly one now. One feels
more alive after reading your
work , Truly , Doug |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 05:19:20 AM AEST
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Oh my .. Stephy .. *wide-eyed stare* I am astounded, my dear. This was so more than
fabulous. Firstly that quote is one of my most ADORED, but that you found this write out
of that and pieced is so flawlessly from beginning to end .. with just the right imagery
.. just the right adjectives .. just the right amount of sinful longing and senual desire
... well, sweets, it totally floored me.
I am all but conSUMED within the lines ... perfection, my dear poet. Ever and always,
your writes hold me captive. There is an innocent darkness within them that I simply
adore and THIS, is one of my absolute favourites. Entirely!!
*hugs*
~Breezy
(missed you) |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 03:22:51 AM AEST
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A most revealing masterpeice of one's soul caught in a state of ambivelance and yet made to look the part of a heart at content with itself. You my little flower are a true teastament to the process of riencarnation, of whom you ask? and i reply, but who else? but the great master himself, Sir William Shakespeere , who has come back as a women . . .
((((((((((((Stephy))))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Nymph Seduction
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 18th December 2007 @ 05:25:51 AM AEST
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Steph I have been away to long babe this was amazing how I have missed your passionate writes of magnificence..
You always leave me panting for more hun
Much love
Love Angelxx |
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