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I Don't Know
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 08:06:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I Don’t Know
I don’t know how to say,
What I feel in my heart.
I don’t know how to erase,
What’s been said from the start.
But I feel these’s been a change,
And I’m as blue as the sky.
I’m left feeling empty,
And wondering why.
What makes two hearts.
Fade over time?
How do you make music?
When there is simply no rhyme
It’s a sad situation,
A heartbreaking ordeal.
When people live lives,
Pretending not to feel.
Sadly we go on,
With little hope in sight.
Smiling through the days,
But crying at night.
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2007-02-28 08:06:39]
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Re: I Don't Know
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 08:13:19 AM AEST
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| So many people have been in this situation when love starts smoldering down...we ask ourselves how to spark it up again or if we really want to....Starting a new fire means looking for dry wood that burns just right...good poem that created my thought for the day |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 12:02:21 PM AEST
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this is a very heartfelt poem.. some people grow apart or are in lives for a reason and they are taken out when the time is done. if feelings fade no point in contuning the relationship because something bad usually happens and someone gets hurt and that is sad.. very good write here
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Re: I Don't Know
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by Grownbabygirl on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 01:12:44 PM AEST
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| very good write and oh so true... thanks for sharing your thoughts. |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by saj on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 03:10:36 PM AEST
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| its so sad yet so true...i dont think there is away to make things right again,might be hard to start all over again with someone new , but then alot better than to live so sad for so long...beautiful write:) |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:17:10 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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