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Daddy's Love
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 11:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just when you came into existence…
Everything changed and the old went…
Sunny days were all around…
Shadows of yesteryear hit the ground…
In love with you I’ll always be…
Can you open your eyes and see…
All my heart I unconditionally give to you…
You take it and leave no matter what I do…
On my knees I nightly pray…
Under God’s watch you wouldn’t stray…
Remember the days that have just past…
Daddy’s love still and always will last…
And when you are up all thru the night…
Doing the maternal things in moonlight…
Never did I want this for you…
Endless joy would only do…
Enter my doorway and walk thru…
Daddy’s love will help you thru…
So stop the games and come straight home to me…
You’re all I need, perfect strangers can surely see…
Oh you’ve made a mistake…
Under my arm it’s not to late…
Come home girl…
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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2007-02-27 23:33:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Daddy's Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 12:10:55 AM AEST (User
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Great format and well penned.
Blessings
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Re: Daddy's Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 01:12:33 AM AEST (User
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Thank you my friend for the poem that you have given me and my daughter it was an overwhelming display of emotions that I felt as I read your masterful piece of work. You sure do know how to bring a daddy to tears. Once again thank you and may God bless you and yours.
Scott
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Re: Daddy's Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 07:45:00 PM AEST (User
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This is heart w5renchingly sad but so beautifully written.
A great gift he gives in this write,
Big huggs, prayer,
emy |
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