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Tied in a knot
Contributed by
Ivy
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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Tied in a knot that will never break,
Leading your life like a piece of cake.
With blend of sugar and a pinch of salt, that is,
Love and arguments both coming along.
Sharing and caring is what one needs,
With loads of love and understanding indeed.
This makes the knot stronger,
Which you enjoy for longer.
I see all of this in your relationship,
And wish and hope that this goes on forever and ever and ever......
Copyright ©
Ivy
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2003-02-24 14:20:00]
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Re: Tied in a knot
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by Damien on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 03:26:02 AM AEST
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| That was really , really good and touchy. It brings out your love for your parents- Damien. |
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Re: Tied in a knot
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 01:56:20 PM AEST
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hey Ivy
Looks good this,
you have tied me, to make a coment on this
wish you good luck for better once
rAm |
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