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Relaxation
Contributed by
sinned
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Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 03:31:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Toes buried tickling the sand
Squinting at water burning by a summer sun
Hues of white orange and red
Gazing at my Lady Huron
White capps line and splash ashore
Feeling so; Well grand
Young lasses dip and on ashore wander
Skimpy clad
Days of youth now passing by
Wonder years
Wonderful years
Looking out yonder
Thoughts in my mind and in my soul
Life a beautiful gift
I see the sun dance upon the water
The lovely Lady Huron
She sparkles in delight
Relaxed I'm so consouled
Sinned
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2007-02-27 15:31:51]
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Re: Relaxation
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 03:54:12 PM AEST
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a very creative write.. i felt relaxation as i read this.. loved the flow.. great wording
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Re: Relaxation
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 12:29:50 AM AEST
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a very peacefull write.
Huggs,
emy |
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