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Holding My Hand
Contributed by
Loriann
on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 02:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hoding My hand.
Makes me know you understand.
Eyes so sincere with care.
A warm touch and smile that fills the air.
Gentle words whispered in my ear.
The loving tone from a love so dear.
Holding my hand as we stroll down the beach.
Welcoming my love with every reach.
A heart felt serenade.
That you yourself made.
Holding my hand as you began to sing.
Then placing upon my finger a diamond ring.
Together forever just you and me.
Together forever is how it will be.
Holding my hand we will never part.
As you hold my hand you now hold my heart.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-02-27 14:40:30]
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Re: Holding My Hand
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 03:55:45 PM AEST
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a very happily expressed piece on love.. I really enjoyed this piece.. its good to see more people happy with love.. i especially loved the ending
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Re: Holding My Hand
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 04:24:51 PM AEST
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I agree totally ......
pleasure to read
Dee xx |
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Re: Holding My Hand
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:39:51 PM AEST
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A perfect fairy tale kind of a poem with joy, happiness and love all the way to last word. beautiful like a "Barbi Doll"
FRANCO.
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Re: Holding My Hand
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 06:26:20 PM AEST
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Aw this is so, so sweet!
Very nicely written! Great work! |
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