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My Favorite Memory.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:36:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Ever so softly
You whisper against my lips
"It's you that I miss..."
As I melt into your eyes
Falling heavy into your warm kiss
Loves ultimate abyss
In this divine moment
I am bathed in your perfect bliss
I feel your hand squeeze mine
Pulling me closer our flesh begins to entwine
Our bodys become one
Flawless by design
Swirling your fingertips along my back
Up and down my spine your name you trace
Resting your cheek against my face
I hear you whisper one more time
Gentle words of poetic rhyme
"Your my dream come true...
And I'm so in love with you"
And with every breath I take
Trembling beside you
I realize that I am awake
This wasn't a dream
This is...
My favorite memory.
...My moment with Luci...
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... [
2007-02-27 12:36:29]
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Re: My Favorite Memory.
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by one11 on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:45:40 PM AEST
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i couldn't have said it better myself.
beautiful.
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Re: My Favorite Memory.
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by DrowningHeart on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 01:13:45 PM AEST
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| How very romantic, I absolutely love it. |
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Re: My Favorite Memory.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 01:31:57 PM AEST
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wow this is a beauitful write.. such heart felt emotional expression.. awesome flow.. I do that same thing to my bf every day I always tell him he is my dream come true..
awesome job
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Re: My Favorite Memory.
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by priss on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:14:26 AM AEST
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| such a beautifully sweet poem! nicely done. |
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Re: My Favorite Memory.
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 08:08:44 PM AEST
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| That is incredibly beautiful and very sweet. Nicely done. |
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