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lucky me
Contributed by
one11
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Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 10:58:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your soul matches your beauty,
and your beauty takes my breath away,
i know it's why i'm in this city,
and know you're why i'm here today.
you bring me hope,
and take away my pain,
so i can now cope,
it's more than words can explain.
like a drug i feel euphoric,
addicted to you i want more,
it may just be pathetic,
but you're this drug i adore.
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2007-02-27 10:58:50]
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Re: lucky me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 11:03:19 AM AEST
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this is a very well expressive devotional penned out peace.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: lucky me
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:49:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful dedication
But I think it needs to be revised
Extended
It just sounds like a few different things I've heard.
You did a good job, I just think you can do better |
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Re: lucky me
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by robsalinas on
Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 09:08:27 PM AEST
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very good dedication
simple (which isn't a terrible thing), but expressive :) |
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Re: lucky me
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by tinna022 on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:37:42 AM AEST
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| the last stanza was my favorite |
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