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See Me Cry
Contributed by
thexshattered
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Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:00:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I cried alone yesterday
Because you weren't there.
You stopped by today, though,
Just to show you cared.
You said that you were sorry,
That you wouldn't do it again.
I wonder how long that will last
Before your promise ends.
I always wonder where you go
When you don't come to see me cry.
Are you sick and tired of me
Because I want to die?
Whenever you dare to hug me,
Your embrace is light as air.
I always feel empty arms and wonder
If you were really there.
All I'm trying to say is
I miss the thoughts in your head.
Your words are cold and empty
When you comfort me in bed.
I hope this poem's good enough
As my final, sad goodbye.
I know I'll miss you all the time
When you don't come to see me cry.
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thexshattered
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2007-02-27 08:00:48]
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Re: See Me Cry
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:14:02 AM AEST
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| A good piece filled with the wisdom of knowing that the comforter is only half there...Your embrace is light as air.I always feel empty arms and wonder if you were really there. Good title with a wonderful follow through.Thanks |
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Re: See Me Cry
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:56:55 AM AEST
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| good write, I love the last two lines |
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Re: See Me Cry
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 09:44:29 AM AEST
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this is a sad write.. but it sounds like your journey or time with this person is coming to an end. if this person hurts you then they probably aren't worth it.. awesome write in expression and well penned
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Re: See Me Cry
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by Loriann on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 02:50:11 PM AEST
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This poem truely moved me and brought tears to my eyes. I have felt and experienced this in my life but realized I was strong and could move on.
Very beautiful
Loriann |
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Re: See Me Cry
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by Sena on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:17:06 PM AEST
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| Nice write...I could personally relate to this. Thx for sharing. |
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Re: See Me Cry
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by SilverDagger on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 11:40:09 PM AEST
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The pain you feel when your comforter comforts you only to show that the latter cares! May you have the strength to come out of this...
Your words convey the agony of your soul. Never stop writing as it will always be a trusted friend in troubled times. |
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