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Realms of Dreams
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:09:11 PM in AEST
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free flowing thoughts
over whelming dreams
forseen, yet not dreamed
to keep is for one to see
you dream and grow
fantasize and flow
becomes as clear as day
but nite brings dismay
for one looks and tells
not always seeming to prevail
unbias isnt always inspiring
but the heart tells..............
THE TRUTH
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brew
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:32:27 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. I absolutely loved the flow and the ending is marvelous.. this is a thoughtful piece..
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:20:28 PM AEST
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Sad but few get to the place to hear the truth of their hearts. It is an endeavor to persevere through thick callous to such powerful voice in our pulse.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:38:22 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of wisdom.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 05:07:56 PM AEST
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A poem of insight and wisdom. written in a true manner of the heart. lovely presentation.
Ben
the artist formerly known as my heartsvoice |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 05:59:14 PM AEST
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OMG woman! That last line .. it's .. it's just ..
well .. it's P.E.R.F.E.C.T.
(my mind is mush, so it would seem)
I wish I could formulate into words just how that
line affected my soul. We cannot EVER hide from
ourselves, eh? I guess, in that case, we should
at least try to be honest with our own hearts.
What delicacies of life await when we embrace
the truth!!! Lovely thoughts, Dayna. As always,
your ability at expressing the deepest thoughts
is masterful and discerning.
I really love this one, hun
~Breezy |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 07:16:26 AM AEST
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Short, deep, and powerful. I thought you did a brillant job writing your thoughts in this poem. I liked how the flow was smooth and I didn't get stuck on any part. The end was very truthful and it is best to always follow your heart.
Take care
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:19:01 PM AEST
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Hey dayna, u have inproved not that u ever needed 2, this is quite fanciful and beautifuly flowing. An airy feel i get from it, truly enjoyable as always reading your delightful work. consider it voted for. 5stars? but of course.
Ben |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:13:11 PM AEST
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Oh I love that last line!!!!!!
What a great finish to a very telling and not so telling piece. |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 06:15:00 PM AEST
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Like a fine wine you just get better as time passes Dayna... this is my new favourite by you! The whole piece is inspiring and thought-provoking... Very well done!
~Scorp. |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 05:48:28 PM AEST
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Like the rest of my fellow poets I am truly impressed with this hun. A thought provoking write filled with insight and wisdom.
Ah if we could all be true to our hearts. I absolutely loved the last line sweetie. You nailed this one~
Always a pleasure to stop by your pages my dear friend.
much love n huge hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by AirHead on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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but the heart tells.........
THE TRUTH
Absolutely.............
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 03:19:38 AM AEST
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wow i say this has got to be your best yet.
great job |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:17:09 AM AEST
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beautifully written, absolutely flows:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:32:21 AM AEST
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| I HOPE YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR HEART ONCE AGAIN BREW I KNOW I HAVE FOUND MINE ONCE AGAIN |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:43:18 PM AEST
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THE HEART WILL ALWAYS TELL IN THE END
HUGS HUN |
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Re: Realms of Dreams
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:59:25 AM AEST
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| You write from such an emotional wisdom. Put perfectly and leaving its imprint in the mind to ponder and search for ones own truth. How wonderfully refreshing to read.Great piece. |
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