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Freedom....can it be ever?
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:01:48 PM in AEST
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Becoming bold
How can one shed its heart
I do not know , how
I stand a firm beleiver on...cold
Solice
To ones self
Set thy heart free
to love
Hold
Keep
And to know
Maybe, its there
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brew
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2007-02-26 21:01:48]
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:34:58 PM AEST
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this is a stunning penned out piece.. it conveys a few different things to the reader.. its like saying rely on yourself and questioning whether you should let soemone into your heart.. i liked this piece
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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We all have to find ways to know our own hearts. Bright star in gracious elegance stated boldly.
Beautiful
Peace
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:42:54 PM AEST
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You're on a role!
Great writing!
big huggs,
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 05:03:02 PM AEST
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Very captivating in it's intensity. A question of one's own conviction. Slendid peice of writting as always.
Ben
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 04:37:49 PM AEST
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Sweetie .. what a thought. Freedom found through bravery ..
and what other wonders are there to behold for us if we could
just let go of that which keeps us from embracing the
one true thing that is so easily and readily available to us?
Nice ponderings Dayna .. always your heart is full of truth
unknown! And an abundance of love awaiting ..
(and he will be the lucky one!)
*hugs*
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 06:54:02 AM AEST
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Well done, Dayna! 'Tain't no maybe though, it's there!!!
Enjoyed the "firm believer" kick in this sucker!
wabl
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 01:15:17 PM AEST
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Well they say you can only truly be loved by someone when you love yourself, and I'm thinking (hoping?) that's when one would begin to experience true freedom --- of the heart, soul, spirit, and mind... That first line:
How can one shed its heart...
*sigh* How many times have I pondered the same thing, and how many more times have I tried to do so, desperately ... It would certainly help at times, wouldn't it?
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 04:17:26 AM AEST
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Wise words not so easily done, but ohhhh so true!
You are a very wise woman! |
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Re: Freedom....can it be ever?
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:44:59 PM AEST
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| ONCE AGAIN I LOVE IT BREW |
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