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~Unsung Lullaby~
Contributed by
misfitme
on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 08:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Haunted by the long lost voice~
of her own unsung lullabys
She gives chance free reign over choice~
as away from life she shys...
No fear lies in her of dying~
deaths self, a mystical muse
Beyond this temporal plane flying~
her mind trys to itself lose...
Yet the plaintive echos survive~
& from her want, she's drawn back
To her earth~bound self, still alive~
& under, "realities" attack...
Forced to in this world linger on~
for not come, has her turn to die
Left crooning to herself, while yet she longs~
for her still unsung lullaby...
~me
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:55:55 PM AEST
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You have this unique poetic voice here a sad minstrel rhythm that had me revive:
"Meeting you at your parents’ gate
We will tell you what to do
What you have to do
to survive.
Leave the rotten towns
of your father
Leave the poisoned wells
& bloodstained streets
Enter now the sweet forest" –Jim Morrison, “The Crossroads”
Here is to a time for every place in the heart.
Blessings
Peace
AJ |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:35:54 PM AEST
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I could imagine;
the soft humming though yet unsung - wish I too was a child to hear you sing. lay down my weary head for dreams to swing.
lovely poem... you are out sanding I must say my friend.
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:45:44 PM AEST
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Sad but strong writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 04:55:01 PM AEST
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A mystic quality with an innosence all of it's own portray this poem very well. tainted with sadness. Another one of your beautiful treasures for all to enjoy. I sure do.
Ben |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by SilverDagger on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 12:10:49 AM AEST
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Your poem expresses your desire to leave the realm of reality and travel to the place of your comfort. I would not call it escapism... only, a desire for a better life.
I am sure that all of us feel that way at some point of ime or the other. Your poem captures that sense so beautifully, and it flows without effort. Great piece of writing! |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:09:33 PM AEST
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Ahhh I hope she finds her music again....this was another lovely piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.
Singing and dancing, are some very healing vibrations.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:29:10 PM AEST
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Dah! Next time ya go to this place 'n' think your lullaby unsung, jus' check out yer posts 'n' friends' comments at YPDC 'n' see if yer friends think this the case. Works fer me! Definitely should work fer Missy. Wonderful meloncholy (sic?) piece here!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 05:44:02 PM AEST
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I'm sad to say I share this sorrow too, and I'm sorry to read of someone else in the same boat... You penned this sombre piece so beautifully though; I love your choice of wording, and your style of format. This piece is haunting in its meaning; truly.
~Scorp. |
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Re: ~Unsung Lullaby~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 05:59:15 PM AEST
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Sweet Missy Me it pains my heart to read such sad words flowing from your pen. I, too have felt like this my dear friend. I'm so sorry hun I hope and pray that you find that wonderful/inspiring music that makes your heart sing with merriment once again real soon. Sue *hugs* Kerry Lynne *tight*
As always your work touches the heart deeply. Shine on sweet Missy Me and don't be afraid to bask in the light~
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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