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Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Venus
in blue jeans
is what i saw the
first time i noticed you,
a renaissance painting without
any flaw 'twas celestial deja vu.
Venus
in blue jeans
in front of my eyes
a goddess you were to
me,
forever
you made my
heart realize how
beautiful love
could
be.
What
with your hair
of stardust gold and
your eyes of angelic blue,
a lucid reflection of cosmic
perfection was standing
amidst my
view.
The
warmth
of your love
you bestowed
on me was like
none i've
experienced
before,
your
all that
this mortal
needed to see to
worship forever
more.
Venus
in blue jeans
appeared in the night
stealing my heart away,
making love on the shore by
the old beacon light like the
tide our bodies did
sway.
Clinging
to me as i reach
into you exploring the depths
of your soul, igniting your fire of
female desire pulsating out of
control.
Venus
in blue jeans
caressed my eyes
with her face of divinity,
with
our hearts
entwined forever
defined our place in
eternity.
Ben
the
artist
formerly
known
as
myheartsvoice
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2007-02-26 13:16:49]
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:37:47 PM AEST
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| As usual, a beautiful dedication |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 01:42:18 PM AEST
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Who ever you are thank you kindly for the vote.
Ben
the
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myheartsvoice. |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:25:52 PM AEST
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This is lovely, it has such a wonderful gentle rhythm that makes you sway along with the beauty of the words. I particularly liked the lines:
'What
with your hair
of stardust gold and
your eyes of angelic blue,
a lucid reflection of cosmic
perfection was standing
amidst my
view.'
What a beautiful, ethereal description!
Dom |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
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Is it your mission to make all of us fall in love w/ your love? 'Cause you're doin' a damn fine job, sweetie. Wow!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~me
ps "Benny she's really keen"~E.J. |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:23:37 PM AEST
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I like the creative approach you have taken with this write.. its a beautiful devotional write and yet very expressive.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by one11 on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST
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| you are a true artist. |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:47:01 PM AEST
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| My heart should beat in your chest as this beats to the rythm of a lovers tune..as the water beats upon the sandy shores...well done |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:27:29 AM AEST
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Wow ben,
U still got it going on.
Simply beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 01:43:28 AM AEST
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"with your hair of stardust gold and your eyes of angelic blue, a lucid reflection of cosmic
perfection was standing amidst my view"
What a wonderful painting of an angel!...
a nice dedication.. venkat
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Re: Venus In Blue Jeans . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 06:03:55 AM AEST
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was there ever a man who had so many loving heartfelt words for the love of his life? oh she must sigh...
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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