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Life Goes On
Contributed by
Baby_Teddy_Bu
on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 11:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How do I survive in this world anymore,
picking each and every wrong door.
I cannot give for the days not done,
spending most of our life just having fun.
Hiding secrets, truths, and lies,
perhaps until the day I die.
Spending each and everyday,
choosing right and wrong in every way.
Each day gets worse I must confess,
there''s no escaping this terrible mess.
Wandering through the thoughts in my head,
as I lay alone on top my bed.
The thought of us will leave and die,
but life goes on and so do I.
For I am strong and did not know it,
writing these rhymes as if I''m a poet.
So I leave you now with nothing more to say,
praying that tomorrow will be a better day.
Copyright ©
Baby_Teddy_Bu
... [
2007-02-26 11:24:12]
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Re: Life Goes On
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by annoiosa on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 11:32:24 AM AEST
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| Nice... :) |
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Re: Life Goes On
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by AmandaChartrand on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 12:31:30 PM AEST
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| You definetly have talent..cheers |
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Re: Life Goes On
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by Sena on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:37:27 PM AEST
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| I liked reading this. It inspired me. Thx for sharing. |
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Re: Life Goes On
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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You sound so lost. I hope your feelings get better with time. This was pretty good but left me feeling ummm lost. lol
Peace to ya,
Thumps ;o) |
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Re: Life Goes On
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by robsalinas on
Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 09:10:30 PM AEST
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very great flow :)
and awesome for your second one, great job hope you continue to write |
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