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World's Biggest Sinner
Contributed by
trueecho
on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:17:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I were to recount everthing I've done wrong
I would run out of space
Lovers I've sinned against and lovers I haven't really loved
I can weep, pray to God
Will that help? Do they feel pain now?
Never met a man without mistakes
What I know now, why didnt I know then?
There are much more deserving people than me
To understand what trueecho means.
Is that the end?
There's a man that showed me how to put the next foot forward
Listen, touch, feel, see, hear, think
Life is a gift. Share it.
Oops I shot myself in the foot.
How long will it hurt?
Copyright ©
trueecho
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2007-02-26 10:17:17]
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Re: World's Biggest Sinner
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:38:32 AM AEST
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this piece has alot of wisdom in it.. some people keep making mistakes and we are given lessons until we learn them i believe we are continued to be given the lessons.. this is a very good write and its very expressive.. great job
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Re: World's Biggest Sinner
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:44:24 PM AEST
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| thank goodness we learn from our mistakes...now stop playing with that gun and put it away...I like the fact a man showed you how to put the next foot forward...sounds like you'll need that advice...lol Thanks |
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