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unborn child
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
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Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:26:08 AM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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I feel you
tuggin at a little
edge of my skirt
I hear you
your silent cries
weeps that left me sleepless
nights after nights
I see you
how you could've looked
your beauty your dashing face
I think of you
what you could've been
what you would've been
and how I would've loved, hated you
but these thoughts won't be unruffled
I can shuff them but nowhere
I don't want to feel the guilt
you were but a consequence
of misdeed
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Re: unborn child
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 05:35:16 AM AEST
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It truly a wonderful emotional poem, this is the reflection of a mother's heart, very touchy Indeed.
but friend an unborn baby cannot be blamed for elders misdeeds, (Ref: "I don't want to feel the guilt
you were but a consequence of misdeed.")
they too have the right to live like you and me... tell me if I am wrong.
FRANCO |
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Re: unborn child
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:01:25 AM AEST
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this is a deeply emotional piece.
it's heart breaking.
very powerful though. |
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