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Rainy Days
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:56:25 PM in AEST
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It's those days
That you wake up to rain
Pounding on the window
Outside the clouds filled with grey
Nothing could be better
As if the rain can help release your pain
The rustic train goes by with the graphiti covering the side
The chill in the air
The rain coming down
Every raindrop that lands, you feel your own heart beat
There's the old buildings
And the dark alleyways
The sound of rain and cars fall together
Slowly this all slips away
Every beat grows faint
Gentely the sun spreads it's rays
Removing the grey clouds
Sheilding your eyes
All this falls away as everything turns bright
Now the rays of light fill your soul
And all your pain gets tucked in tight
Burning your soul
You're caged inside
Longing for it to return to the way it was
The rain pooring down
Falling to the beat of your heart
Alowing you to release your fears, your pain
Filling you with joy
You feel so free
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The_Unknown
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2007-02-25 23:56:25]
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Re: Rainy Days
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 12:14:17 AM AEST
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Good writing, my sweet friend.
Keep up the good work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Rainy Days
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by Bruce on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 12:30:21 AM AEST
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| Very Well Writen |
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Re: Rainy Days
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by needledancing on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:05:20 AM AEST
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| I always feel sad when it rains.. despite my logical mind knowing the earth needs rain...I always remember puddle splashing with my siblings...perhaps it causes me to miss them...anyway...I think this is refreshing and well written. Good write |
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