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Braiding The Strands of Time
Contributed by
arden
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Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 09:48:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see your face
Cast with expressions of black on white
Roughly carven from stone
Existing, but only just slight
Today was Autumn
And I lingered there
In the drifting sea of color
But even then, I watched you stare
As you smiled to another…
And I sat upon a throne of marble
Braiding the strands of time
As the snow kissed your lips
Silently knowing, that you cannot be mine..
Copyright ©
arden
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:03:57 PM AEST
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This is the voice of sculpture come alive and seen in multi-views against the backdrop of being.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:32:29 AM AEST
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Great seeing you again.
Excellent poetry as always you write.
your
venkat
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:08:43 AM AEST
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wow this is a very creative and well expressed penned piece of work.. its like it all comes together like a painting.. perfect wording and the pic goes with it well.. by the way long time no see in the forum.. glad to see you writing again
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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I'm not certain where to start ... at first I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me. It would appear as though they were not. Welcome back, Becky ... I would offer that you have been missed.
I was drawn to these lines ...
"Today was Autumn
And I lingered there
In the drifting sea of color..."
they seemed to jump out at me and carry the rest of the words with them.
I have missed your words and images, I hope your stay will last longer than your absence.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 11:04:54 AM AEST
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what could i say your writes have always been excellent and better then most here.
welcome back becky
big hugs |
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST
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Your descriptions are so vivd and unique.
I have truly missed your absence.
This speaks to me of Autumn, of time nearing and end, sadness and nastolgia.
Wonderful to read you again, be welcome. |
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:25:42 AM AEST
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So few words yet they said so much
Beautiful write
Dee xx |
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by Lee on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 11:53:03 AM AEST
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Dear Arden,
I enjoyed this poem very much. It seems
to have an ethereal air to it. Wonderful
attention to emotional detail; every line
reads like opening a mystical treasure trove.
Thank you for sharing this!
Sincerely,
Lee |
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Re: Braiding The Strands of Time
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 01:38:51 PM AEST
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beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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