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Chocolate
Contributed by
Soccerflyer27
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Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:06:56 PM in AEST
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Chocolate is such a lovely sight
That it fills the heart with such delight
Although it is not good for you
To stay away, I just can’t do
So smooth, so rich, so nice and sweet
I would do anything for that treat!
The taste, so luscious, you won’t forget,
but the calories, evil, you may regret.
But even though your body may suffer
Living without it is so much tougher
To finish chocolate, is something you cannot prevent,
you’ll sit there and wonder, where the hell it all went.
All in all, chocolate is my life
Someday, I will become its wife
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Soccerflyer27
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Re: Chocolate
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:16:17 PM AEST
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I giggled at the end, however I beg to differ modern research says its good for us, bioflavonoids and all, so your 'husband' won't be all bad.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Chocolate
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 03:58:53 PM AEST
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Never been hooked on choccie myself but I liked this little piece ... Teehe
Dee xx |
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Re: Chocolate
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by wildcherry3393 on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 05:06:11 PM AEST
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| its very good, chocolate, and the poem, |
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Re: Chocolate
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 05:27:46 PM AEST
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| This poem is awesome and now I want some chocolate. Excellent poem. |
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Re: Chocolate
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:14:56 PM AEST
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| I love chocolate...it may make a mess if it melts in its place...but I love chocolate all over my face...yummm.... |
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Re: Chocolate
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by ashleigh on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 05:29:01 PM AEST
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How dare you make me crave chocolate this way! Just kidding... but not really. Lol. Too bad I have NO chocolate at my house... just the chocolate chips in my teddy grahams... how sad :[
Cute poem!
Ash |
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