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The big guy in the sky
Contributed by
farfallen
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Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 12:13:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Imagine someone so nice and loving
That will never budge from your side
Even if you give him a shoving
His friends are along with you to guide
Still, when you betray or curse him
He just greets you with open arms and smiles
Because his heart is filled with love to the brim
Especially during our worst trails
When times get bad he is who we turn to
Blaming him and asking why poor me why
But when things are as sweet as honeydew
There’s no thankfulness or grateful reply
We all need to see the great blessing
Or you are just as useful as dressing
Copyright ©
farfallen
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2007-02-25 12:13:32]
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Re: The big guy in the sky
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 07:33:25 AM AEST
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SO VERY TRUE AND SO VERY BEAUTIFUL, IT IS HE THE BIG GUY, NOT ONLY YOU LOOK UP TO BUT ME TOO.
WELCOME TO YPDC. FRIEND.
FRANCO. |
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Re: The big guy in the sky
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by robsalinas on
Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 09:13:21 PM AEST
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very true and i love the message
totally agree :)
on critiquing though, i'd say there could be a little more, and there could be something better for that last line
but great write! |
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