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Fire
Contributed by
MacKenzie
on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 09:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Two souls touch
sparks fly
ignite in the wind
fire spreads through your viens
burns you from the inside out
a touch
and you melt
like hot lava
spilling over
a kiss
you explode
untrolled passion
existing
just existing
not questioning
for once
riding the thrill of feelings
enjoying the burn
being free
its like a drug
the passion takes you somewhere far away
you burn till you can't take it anymore
even thinking about it later makes your temperature rise
anticipation
desperation
its not just wanting
its needing
like an addiction
magnets attracted
invisible pull
locking them
together
as one..
Copyright ©
MacKenzie
... [
2007-02-25 09:17:10]
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Re: Fire
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 09:30:32 AM AEST
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My friend you have illustrated your feels with colorful words, specially those first stanza. very good indeed.
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Re: Fire
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 09:48:51 AM AEST
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I love the way you expressed such feeling with the words . Bravo to you.
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Re: Fire
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:45:38 PM AEST
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| Nicely expressed and great structure. Awesome job. |
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