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The Dust Ward
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:22:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It's cold tonight
and outside the snow
serenely falls
I'm waiting for the footsteps
to echo down the halls,
In room 208
that's where I end my day
after being undercover
looking for another
who feels the same.
I drift on flows
written on ypdc
loving the way
the innervisions
undulate vividly,
I smoke and I sip
and float into fantasies
I giggle a little
when the voices start whispering.
Something's coming
I sense a happening
the other crippled pilgrims are moaning
and I dig the sound
cause i know soon I will be escaping.
They call my name
I start to shake
and anticipate
as the pain slowly fades.
Somebodies talking
but I can't hear what they say
I'm waiting
patiently
for the meds to kick in
and the Illusions to begin,
I'm just passing time
in room 208
waiting for the next time
the footsteps are echoing.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-02-25 02:22:13]
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Re: The Dust Ward
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:26:40 AM AEST
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Very intersting write as usual , friend.
big huggs, smiles,
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Re: The Dust Ward
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 03:34:27 AM AEST
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I like the atmosphere and expression of this one, and the way you pull off an almost casual use of "ypdc".
Nicely done.
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Re: The Dust Ward
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:44:54 PM AEST
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"...the other crippled pilgrims are moaning..."
Brilliant
I have spent time on the Ward as well.
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: The Dust Ward
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by needledancing on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 12:52:51 PM AEST
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| A wonderful piece of work . Well done. |
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