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Warm Rain
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 11:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Imagine world
As a child once imagined
Hiding from the darkness’s
Of his own dreams
Imagine
The truth of his tiny articulate hand
Long ago forgotten
In the tears of an old man
Remembering nothing
But the cold glass
That takes away
The memory of
Warm rain
Imagine world
As a brother imagines
When alone and away
Locked in his own life
Imagine
The press of his ear on
The phone
Talking to no one
Screaming to no one
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2007-02-24 23:41:36]
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Re: Warm Rain
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 12:16:47 AM AEST
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Great writing, friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Warm Rain
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 09:52:27 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this . Thank you for sharing.
Loriann |
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Re: Warm Rain
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:15:34 PM AEST
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Such a surprise ending, not what i expected.
I loved the last four lines of the first stanza.
xXx
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Re: Warm Rain
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:24:37 PM AEST
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| When I read this for some reason I think of an autistic chile...hiding from the shadows of his own dreams...locked in his own life imagined..That's what it calls to mind for me..In which case I deem it very wise... |
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