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A Mother's Son
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 11:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Into a man your son has grown to be
What a man he is I see
Lean strong handsome build
He has entered a unique guild
A league of men that one could trust
Who stand tall and strong wherever thrust
Leaders of the world tomorrow
With strength others seek to borrow
A foundation cast has been set
A mould ready for the test
Alone a time for him to stand
And still freely he gives his hand
Truly proud a mother can be
To have a son such as he
Her work and toil nay a waste
A special fruit a special taste
Now I walk to follow the path anew
To seek these treasures in what I do
My Hand I reach to feel and touch
For a time with my lover to love so much
Sunday, 25 February 2007
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Re: A Mother's Son
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 11:28:16 PM AEST
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Incredible writing.
good work.
big huggs,
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Re: A Mother's Son
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:55:17 AM AEST
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Gosh, what do I comment on? The flow which took not my effort to find...or the feel good vibration held within well constucted rhyme...
I really, really enjoyed this & as I wasn't havin' the best of nights & this made me feel good, you get a BIG 10 stars for the writes self & a BIG thank you for my smile!
BigLove~me |
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