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Paperback Scrawl.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Amidst her most toxic flaw
She still manages to leave me in awe
Through promises broken
And words unspoken
She brings the light of day
Still manages to keep me captivated in every way
Born a blessing, a cure to the curse
Stuck in the words and the verse
I traverse the skies
Traveling through vague notions
Twisted in devotion
I bring storms to my ocean
For she is the sand
I long to crash my waves into the body of her land
Understand...
This is more than just a poetic prose
This is so much more deeper than anybody knows
It flows and grows
Bleeds through and shows
Never give up this fight
Wrap my body around her life
Never lose sight
Let my soul take flight
Bleed the ink I write
This is beautiful
This is true
And I just wanna say that I...
I love you.
...ShesMyInspiration...
Copyright ©
bleedthelove
... [
2007-02-24 19:48:55]
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Re: Paperback Scrawl.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:02:32 PM AEST
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Well I have no clue who she is but if she reads this write you'll have no problem. you certainly melted me to the core with these magic words.
Wwwooooooooooooo.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Paperback Scrawl.
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:35:46 AM AEST
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| Oh my. This is amazing. Took my breath away. |
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Re: Paperback Scrawl.
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by Dom on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 04:09:49 AM AEST
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This is amazing, such potent images: 'bleed the ink I write' and 'I long to crash my waves into the body of her land' gave me goosebumps. Great write,
Dom |
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Re: Paperback Scrawl.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:40:18 AM AEST
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| Wowww. I'm pretty sure you took everyones breath away with this one. Somebody needs to put a microphone in front of you, you could melt an entire audience, i LOVE this poem. |
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Re: Paperback Scrawl.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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this just flows so perfectly together.. it sounds like a love song. beautifully written and i absoluetely love the expression and the ending awesome job
vampyress jenni |
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