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Rain Falls Down
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 06:46:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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What reamins is lost, and I'm drifting away form here. Let the rain come down, wash away the things I can't remember. All the darkness clears with sound. Let the light set me into motion.
Hope spreads as daylight comes. I see you there and it rushes on. Maybe this will work, maybe it is done. For once I feel like there's something to live for.
Holding onto that last grasp of warmth, finding that memory stays away. No more reasons to feel remorse, just the thought of you and I right now.
Feeling you holding me, brings back the reason for living. Let the scars wash away. Let the storms set in motion.
Rain comes down to wash my face. There you are watching me. Maybe this will work, maybe it is done. Here I am free forever. Here I am in your arms as the rains falls down.
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Re: Rain Falls Down
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:14:39 PM AEST
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Divinely beautifull.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rain Falls Down
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:21:18 PM AEST
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Wonderful prose, you have a string voice, and the flow is fabulous.
keep it up.
xXx
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