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paradise
Contributed by
spend782
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 06:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Wouldn't it be nice if all bad went away,hate scorn discrimination against the other race
wars would end, peace would begin, and all emotinal scars would mend. love peace happiness would take place
wiped away tears amongst the sanddened face,all beautiful and wounderous things in life would take place
in this little place I call paradise.
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Re: paradise
(User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:15:29 AM AEST
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I liked this. It is a positive way to want life to be.
Loriann |
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Re: paradise
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by oceaneyes on
Saturday, 5th December 2009 @ 11:30:35 AM AEST
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| not corny at all i really liked this a lot actually. |
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