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Why
Contributed by
suzy
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:26:07 PM in AEST
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Tears falling..breath catching..heart aching..head pounding
Mouth opening wanting to scream but only silence
I need you to need me like you did oh so long ago
Why why why echoing through my mind
Just leave me alone please I just wanna die
Where did I go wrong what did I do to you
Please come back please don't leave me here
Tears falling..breath catching..heart aching..head pounding
Now nothing
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suzy
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2007-02-24 14:26:07]
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Re: Why
(User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:54:23 PM AEST
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Suzy,
Nice but very sad... I think if anyone does not want
you the way you want them they are not worth the
ink you use on them... But that said,
Poetry comes from the heart. be it broken or lost in joy...
I loved your words... I felt it...
Bill |
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Re: Why
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:41:27 PM AEST
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| These words definately echo in my heart. And I admire Bills comment....I will carry those words. Excellent poem. |
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