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Once Again
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:15:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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" Once Again "
A sudden passing of a loved one
hurtful tears now flow from my heart
leaving me empty and so worn
A beautiful life once full to live
suddenly made now vacant
a soul mate is left to mourn
Only memories of love I cling
left by them in my soul
patiently waiting to be renewed
I reach gasping for my past love
quickly I see to find
only memories now be viewed
From deep within my soul
I cry for my lost love
empty echo's only returned
I lay upon my empty bed
beginning now to fade
their missing love forever yearned
I am left to walk all alone
this journey now through life
forever I shall cry
Strong waves of emptiness
inside of me crashing
left me wondering why
Past days now all gone
faded for good
one sure thing I know
My time will soon come
my time to pass
our love Once Again
will forever grow!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
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Re: Once Again
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:51:08 PM AEST
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Mickey my friend... So sad but gloriously written...
the lines:
"From deep within my soul
I cry for my lost love
empty echo's only returned"
Leaves me to wonder... in reading your entire poem
I see that your love is not lost... It is right here in your words in heart....
Beautiful my friend and thank you for sharing it...
Bill
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Re: Once Again
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:13:11 PM AEST
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Elegant and moving, the pace you set takes us into the depths of such rich living emotion. Heartfelt Condolences and Kudos my friend.
Peace
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Re: Once Again
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 09:06:45 PM AEST
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Heart wrenchingly beautifull.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
You still have us, my friend any time you need us.
Big luv,huggs, prayer,
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Re: Once Again
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:49:32 AM AEST
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wow this is such a heart felt sad write.. but the ending makes it all the better because its an outpour of feelings and then it shows hope.. beauitfully penned!!
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Re: Once Again
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 05:32:15 PM AEST
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| Beautifully tragic. I felt the emotion in each line. So beautifully expressed. Excellent job Mickey. |
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