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LIVING HURTS
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emystar
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:18:47 AM in AEST
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Delight yourself also in the
LORD, and He shall give you
the desires of your heart.
: Psalms 37:4
SultryRose's Signatures
Dieing is real sad but
we all still gotta do it.
Living is life eternal
No matter where we sit.
Been at deaths door even went in.
Doesn't hurt to die, no, no, no
yo, yo, yo.
repeat
So being eternal wisdom
lets me smile, in at noon
Plant seed of joy around
where eva we luv's found.
Be contented slow to anger
Like Jesus in the manger.
Show luv by being luv the same.
Forgiveness in life we sustain.
Know that luv reachess
beyond Earthly realm.
Treat others how you
Wonna be treated, no flim flam.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:53:33 AM AEST
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A divine write " luv reachess
beyond Earthly realm"..
Its a beautiful song.. venkat
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by thexshattered on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 04:48:14 AM AEST
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I liked the main essence of the poem. It's quite rare that I come across a positive poem anymore.
Could you tell me, is this meant to be a song? Because I wasn't sure when I saw the second stanza. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 05:37:04 AM AEST
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Sorry this one needs some work. I see I made a couple of bo boos.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 05:46:27 AM AEST
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Its a very meaningful piece of work. I liked the way you have treated the words. felt good to read.
FRANCO. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 05:49:33 AM AEST
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| Keep the pen flowing...always good to read. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:40:58 AM AEST
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Beautiul words to live by. your writting never ceases to amaze me along with your perfected stye. 'Tis emystar at her best, always.
Ben |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:03:29 PM AEST
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Emy...
Love it girl... Strong meaning and hit me hard...
your words: "Doesn't hurt to die,"
It only hurts your loved one... Which is the reason
for this song... isn't now...
Thanks my friend
Bill |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:19:35 PM AEST
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Grabbed it you did with a down to earth lyric.
Much Love
Yang |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 04:17:24 PM AEST
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"Dieing is real sad but
we all still gotta do it."
What a great opening and the whole thing is full of energy !
Good job
:D |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:58:33 PM AEST
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You're right, emy... there's no avoiding that eventually end. And yes... it's how we live that determines... well... how well we live.
Thanks for the reminder -
~Snem
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 11:46:44 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful song.. well expressed and well penned out..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by priss on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 11:37:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful as always. "plant seed of joy in pain"- my favorite line. we can't know what joy is can we, unless we've experienced pain. loved it. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 05:34:13 AM AEST
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If we all lived by your words the world would be a beautiful place loved it brilliant xxxx
Be contented slow to anger
Like Jesus in the manger.
Show luv by being luv the same.
Forgiveness in life we sustain. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:20:10 PM AEST
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divinely inspired emy.. truly-
I feel the hand of God in this, guiding your every word~
..as I'm sure, we'd all be better for it, to live and die by this credo~
painfully beautiful my friend~
you've invoked in me, much humility with this~
B
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 09:33:06 PM AEST
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Emy, my dearest friend .. this piece sends shivers
throughout my entire being. Wise words, my friend.
Especially those last two lines! An incredible truth!
Compassionate and beautiful, as you've always been.
peace and love,
~Breezy |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 04:28:47 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom beautifully portrayed on loving living and dying. You might say... having visited deaths' door, it's not a fear anymore, which makes life's burdens easier to bare.
Those are thoughts your lovely poem brought to mind....
Will |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:19:08 PM AEST
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| This is very enlightening. It actually gives comfort to the reader. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 01:53:28 AM AEST
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Well Em, I for one am glad it didn't just 'float on by'... You speak the truth here, and the words resonate with me even more just thinking about where you live, and having been through the horrors of Katrina and all... If that wouldn't be a humbling experience, then I don't know what would. Thanks for posting; your writes/songs are always a pleasure to read : )
~Scorp. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 09:09:15 PM AEST
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What can I say that hasn't been said?
Your words lift me
you are needed.... |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 11:27:36 AM AEST
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| This is a really nice poem. Good job |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:53:49 PM AEST
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catchy tune emy girl!
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by BOZEEN on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 03:00:46 PM AEST
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| very good reading. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 10:23:36 AM AEST
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what can I say that has not been said..,
sorry
I'm so sporadic,
anyway
great flow here. |
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Re: LIVING HURTS
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by prabal77 on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 08:06:36 PM AEST
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what r u any kind of poetic goddess or what...
u r poems r too good...i m speechless |
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