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Before the Dawn
Contributed by
thexshattered
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Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Blue eyes overcast,
Residing over the universe,
Crying drops of dew
Onto its majestic vessel.
Lids ready to close
Against beautiful light.
Lashes grazing gently
On the brink of loved soil
As your irises start to bleed.
Open wide once more
For one last magnificent look
Your beautiful blue eyes,
Watery enchantments
Held up by the sky.
Copyright ©
thexshattered
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2007-02-23 22:12:12]
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Re: Before the Dawn
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:16:03 AM AEST
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Amazing poetic discription..though the imagery is quite un conventional.
Keep writing on..
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Re: Before the Dawn
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 12:33:20 AM AEST
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Very creativly written.
big huggs,
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Re: Before the Dawn
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 03:53:18 PM AEST
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Nice write Thanks fer sharing
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Re: Before the Dawn
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by Sheveg on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 03:46:55 PM AEST
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At first I thought you were in the medical profession. Nice poem.
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