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My Adonis
Contributed by
princesspage
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Upon the cherry branches so sweetly hanging there
Between the glistening spider webs and flutters in his hair
I stared into his eyes seeking a reaction
A spark, a look of lust to mirror my attraction
I stared for all temptation at the angel I did see
I feared to speak or whisper, for fright he might face me
Masquerading softly surrounded by morning rays of light
His hair falling onto his face beneath his halo glowing bright
Beneath the cherry trees arms so adoringly sitting there
Below the shimmering berries and pink blossoms in his hair
I stared with sheer devotion at the man beheld to me
I feared to utter a word at the perfection I did see
I gazed at his grace with seduction I never knew
I longed to trace his face and hold him as lovers do
Then place one suffering kiss upon his blushing cheek
And whisper nothings faintly, such rapture do i seek
I watched him sweep away the stars to welcome morning in
As my body devoured the thought that such passion only ends in sin.
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Re: My Adonis
(User Rating: 1 ) by BigMike on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST (User
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This is a really great write! this really caught my eye being for the fact that I too have loved but not been loved in return.
Keep writting-
hopefully your mind and your heart stop fighting-
that's how I got through-
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Re: My Adonis
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:36:17 PM AEST (User
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A great write ... I hope he notices you and things work out for the best. |
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Re: My Adonis
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:47:44 PM AEST (User
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princess, just tell him! oh god, i would love to hear how this fairytale ends...you obviously found something in this guy, give him a chance to fidn it in you...such a beautiful write... *sigh* Love...
Lindsey |
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