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From the window sill
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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God is still alive
Don't worry
If I still pray
I am still
Right here
In this ****** *** world
With ya
Pain is real
All as strong
As mentality
Born to play along
God is father
But father didn't seem to be there
We live on
We're still
In this ****** *** world
Together
Pain is real
All along
As mentality
Learn to be strong
God gives discipline
God is father
To our mental sponge
But the masses
Our community
This society still acts
Out of disorder
& this disorder
Our disorder
Wraps around the body
To represent
Our mental
Mentality
Of our race
Our humanity
Leaving us from that place
God is still alive
Don't worry
If I will pray
I am still right here
In this ****** *** world
With ya
Pain is but a thing
That turns to beat you
To change your view
At the end it...
Leads us from that grace
All I know is I'm trying to keep those flowers growing on the window sill
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-02-23 17:17:37]
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Re: From the window sill
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 06:12:21 PM AEST
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It is poem of anguish:
GOD OUR FATHER IS HERE WITH US AND YOUR PRAYERS SHALL BE HEARD.
It is indeed a well composed poem.
FRANCO. |
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Re: From the window sill
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 06:16:40 PM AEST
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| i really like the flow of this poem. its great. and it makes a point were in this ****** ****** world together |
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Re: From the window sill
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 06:43:08 PM AEST
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Quite a touching write. reaching in to one's heart and sould and drawing out the tears. you write with impact.
Ben
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Re: From the window sill
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 09:23:33 PM AEST
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All I know is I'm trying to keep those flowers growing on the window sill
vERY GOOD WRITINGAND AWESOMELY CREATIVE.
HUGGS, SMILES,
emy |
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Re: From the window sill
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 05:51:57 AM AEST
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| Good write rhei always look forward to reading your words. |
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Re: From the window sill
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by one11 on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:21:04 PM AEST
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| very well thought and pleasant to a dismal crowd or a realist crowd. i could tell you have that certain spark that makes someone get the chills when performing in front of an audience. i enjoy the thought and whole heart that you put into your work. it causes great release. i hope you will enjoy my work as much as i have enjoyed the few i have read of yours. you can read most of my work here [blog.myspace.com] |
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