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Did I Love Her?
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 04:46:04 PM in AEST
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She says I never cared, that I used her and lied.
Yes, I did and a part of me died.
I try to punish myself because I caused your pain,
but it seems it wouldn't matter, you even hate my name.
I changed while we were together, changed back to the old me,
I never wanted it to happen, but I had to set the lion free.
I never, ever meant to hurt you or see you cry.
I never wanted to leave you, I never wanted to lie.
Times change, people change as time moves on,
now I sit here wondering if we could have lasted long.
But the question is did I really care.
I did, and now the pain is more than I can bear.
I shoot poison into my veins to make myself feel better,
I even tried to write you an apology letter.
I never sleep, cause I always see your face,
I wish we could start again, have the past erased.
But who am I kidding, what do I think?
I believe I will die alone, in sorrow's drink.
Poison in my blood, poison in my head,
I wish, yes I wish, I was already dead.
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Re: Did I Love Her?
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 06:01:52 PM AEST
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It is a wonderful poem, if it is only a poem - if not I think you must talk to your love rather then talking about "poison in the blood" it is like having evil poison in the head.
A honest way to express your emotions.
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Re: Did I Love Her?
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by Grownbabygirl on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 07:09:45 PM AEST
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| Your poem was very heart felt, thank you for sharing and good luck. |
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Re: Did I Love Her?
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:01:23 PM AEST
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Wo partner,
If she makes u feel this way by her words then get on your knees-n=thank God ur free.
Take it easy on yourself 'cause we all make mistakes.
Hang tuff, big huugs, Prayer,
emy
Incredible writing! |
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Re: Did I Love Her?
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by ginabelle on
Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 12:16:28 AM AEST
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| Wow! I am somewhat speechless after reading this. It is amazing the affect that love can have on one's mind. But in regards to your writing, good job. I hope everything is better now. |
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