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All My Eyes Can See.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Like a newborn taking it's breath for the very first time
Like jumping from a bridge in a free fall dive
Like touching blue skies in a world painted black
Now that you've touched my heart
Theres no turning back
I know how true love feels
And I'll never be the same
I don't wanna be
Your all my blue eyes can see
And nothin' else will ever be this real
Now that I know how life can feel
It's the moment when I knew that love was so much more than a word
So much sweeter than the sweetest song I've ever heard
It's the answer to the question I've been askin' all my life
If I had 3 wishes I use them all on asking you to be my wife
I know how perfection feels
And I'll never be the same
I don't wanna be
I'm telling you in all honesty
Your all my blue eyes can see
I see the perfect lover
I see no other
And when I look at you and your son
I see an amazing mother...
And although I'm not the one you adore
And I'm not the one you want anymore...
I just want you to know...
I kept every promise I ever made to you
I stayed loyal and I stayed true...
You were my best friend, my everything...
And I truly did love you.
Good bye love of my life.
...<3 L 637...
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bleedthelove
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2007-02-23 12:48:00]
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Re: All My Eyes Can See.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:53:10 PM AEST
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wow this is an amazing devotional write.. this sounds like a love rock song.. beautifully done
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Re: All My Eyes Can See.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:48:28 AM AEST
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Sad but awesomly beautifull.
Great writing.
Hang tuff, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: All My Eyes Can See.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:33:49 AM AEST
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| This poem is so sad and so beautiful at the same time. Its rare to find a person with the qualities you possess, beautiful things will come your way. Amazing job on this poem. |
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