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The storm
Contributed by
Loriann
on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:03:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The wind blows through the dismal dark.
The lightning strikes with a powerful spark.
The thunder rolls through with a loud pounding boom.
Accompanied by raindrops of cold dark gloom.
The wind howls through my rain drenched hair.
As the storm rolls through the cold cool air.
Animals run in panic and fear.
Knowing the storm is growing near.
Windows rattle and shutter in the breeze.
Leaves rustle and blow above in the trees.
Streams and rivers swell by raindrops that fall.
As Rolling thunder and lightning let out the call.
The storm approaches and all beware.
The dimal weather that lies thick in the air.
Copyright ©
Loriann
... [
2007-02-23 12:03:17]
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Re: The storm
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 02:53:25 PM AEST
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And like the perfect storm this is the perfect poem. A real simple and innocent beautiful
presentation. I was swept away by the experience.
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Re: The storm
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:46:19 AM AEST
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Oh Loriann, What a beautiful orchestration of nature you have composed here. I hope you know that your talent is glowing ever so brightly and I say you go girl. Wonderful job.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: The storm
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by kelkel on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 12:20:41 PM AEST
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I love storms and i love this poem very well put toghter poem
Love your sis,
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